
O boy, do I wish ….
I’ve tried outlining, but except for a handful of scenes, I
simply cannot tell what needs to happen in a story until I start writing in my
character’s voices. One scene leads to the next.
As J.R.R. Tolkien famously said, “All those who wander are
not lost.” If you’re a panster, trust yourself to discover your novel’s path as you write it (Tweet this). There are a few tips that will shine a light on your path though,
so you don’t get so far off the track that you have a mess on your hands when
you’re done.
Keep
your premise firmly in mind as you write each scene. It may
take you a hundred pages to truly discover where your story is going, but you
should have a strong premise from page one, and each scene should build and
deepen that premise in some way. Follow tangents as you wish, as long as you
keep this in mind, and you’ll still have a coherent story in the end.
Before
you write, choose two or three comparable novels to the one you intend to write
as loose guides. That is, select novels you’ve read that have
the type of structure and audience you’re aiming for. Even go so far as
outlining them. When you feel lost in your writing, understanding the structure
of similar novels will help you lay trustworthy paths of your own.
Know
what your characters’ goals are and put obstacles in their way. Don’t
be shy. Stir up the waters and create lots of trouble for your characters.
They’ll enjoy some small successes along the way, but ultimately, if you write most
scenes to make your reader worry, you’ll end up with a stronger story.
End
each scene with a hook. This may simply mean that you’ve moved
your character and his goal further apart. But anything that makes your reader
want to read on will do (i.e., a mystery that is laid out in the last
paragraph). Incidentally, ending on a hook may make it easier for you to know
where to start when you come back to the computer as well.
Deepen
your characters. Lay them
out for your readers until they’re as real as family and friends (although a
little more dramatic, if you please). If you make your reader fall in love with
your heroes and heroines, even a meandering scene here or there will sing.
Aim for
the finale. Although I don’t outline, I generally have a
fairly strong image of the catastrophe at the end, that great battle that makes
it seem all is lost, but ultimately brings the character to his or her reward.
If you know the finale, you’ll faithfully build to it.
If you follow these guidelines, you don’t need an outline to make sure your story stays on the lit path. But what about coming up with the story itself when you have no outline to refer to?
Last
but not least, leave time for your story to stew. If
you’re not following an outline, you must give your muse time to dream up new
scenes. For me, that means taking long walks or doing mindless activities
(dishes or laundry) alone, while my mind drifts. When I let my unconscious mind
free, I usually find images or snatches of dialogue that will take me through
the next scene or two.
And while I don’t outline my whole novel, I do tend to jot
down the basics of the next scene before I start. There’s something about the
kinesthetic act of putting pen to paper that helps me plot out the skeleton of
my day’s writing.
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Great thoughts as usual Rachel. I'm thinking that when all is said and done we both end up at the same point. I think you start a novel our as a panster and eventually move into a planner, whereas I start a novel out as an outliner and in the middle end up a bit of a panster.
ReplyDeleteVery true. Although I envy your planning in advance skills. I often think first drafts might be less stressful that way.
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